response: innocence is bliss

The Innocence is Bliss essay had the most emotion than the other readings and possessed such a candid, genuine impression. You could experience her excitement when she agreed to be Colin’s girlfriend as she “blushed and beamed.” Her admiration for her boyfriend flooded this paper as she spoke about making the cardboard posters with her friends and cheering for his baseball team. There happened to be a somber moment when she mentioned how “Colin came to my softball games, but he never cheered as loud as I seemed to cheer for him,” but it seems like it was her was of suggesting the relationship didn’t work out. She quickly regarded that sentence by saying how the duo became best friends during the time they went out. You could tell the writer wrote what was in her heart, giving her paper such an honest impression.